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01 March 2009 @ 08:40 am
[Fic] Access Denied: 01  
Title: Access Denied
Chapter: 1/??
Author: [info]evilgeniuskoji
Pairing: Ruki/Reita
Genre: Scifi, mystery, general
Rating: PG-13
Warning: None
Summary: AU. Saiko Reality is the hottest new virtual reality simulator. With in-game experiences enhanced to maximum performance, this newest PSC product has integrated itself into the very heart of Central Tokyo, exceeding all expectations. However, is this highly realistic machination simply a game? As Ruki delves into the secrets of Saiko Reality in search of his lost memories, he discovers that "reality" isn't quite so pretty...
Comments: Decided to give multichaptered fics another go. Hoping it turns out well and doesn't suck. Thanks to my awesome beta, [info]visualcomplex .



The world was breaking apart.

He could feel it as the world wavered and slipped in and out of focus, as he watched his arm shatter into disjointed pixels. They snapped back together, reforming neatly, only to turn to fragments again. The sound of his partner’s voice, frantically calling his name, sounded tinny and distorted, and grew more and more distant by the second.

“—ki! Snap out of it, we have to get out of here! They’re locking down on us—”

The strangest sensation washed over him, and every particle of his borrowed body felt pricked by needles, as if the whole thing had fallen asleep. His companion gave a cry of alarm as his hand went right through what had been a substantial shoulder.

A sharp pain throbbed in his temple, and he doubled over, the edges of his vision graying rapidly. The sensations that held him in existence began to numb; scent, touch, sight and sound was dead to him.

Sound came back abruptly to the flat buzz of white noise. His eyes stared into static, and two words flashing red:

Access Denied.

---

Light stung his eyelids and brought him to bleary, uncomfortable consciousness. Opening them took an amount of effort he’d not expected, and he felt stiff everywhere. A hiss of pain escaped between his teeth when he sat up.

The room he was in was a stark white, matching the starched bed sheets draped over his body. There was little else in the room, except for some sort of complicated machinery sitting by his bed.

Where was he? He had to get back, or they’d think…

He stopped short. Where did he have to go back to? Who were ‘they’?

Who…who was he?

A head of messy brown hair popped through the open door, and young brown eyes widened at the sight of him sitting up and obviously awake. "Morita-sensei! He’s awake!” the nurse hurried in, her uniform only slightly rumpled as she checked the machine next to him with eerie efficiency. “How are you feeling?” she asked in a kindly voice. “They found you passed out in a public Saiko Reality terminal in Akihabara. What were you doing there? They couldn’t find any connection to your collapse, and it’s not anemia or any physical weakness…”

Saiko Reality? Public terminal? A few hazy facts and pictures came to mind, but none of them made sense. His voice sounded thick and clumsy as he spoke. “I don’t…I’m not sure…miss, do you know who I am?” he asked rather desperately.

The nurse blinked at him owlishly, her hands still snapping switches and pushing buttons as if she were working on automatic. “I’m afraid not, sir,” her voice was apologetic. “We couldn’t find any identification on you at all, and that’s the strange thing. No license, no passport…you don’t even have a phone on you. If that game is starting to interfere with players physically, I’ll file a complaint, see if I don’t…” she frowned at his quickly paling face. “What’s the matter?”

“Does anyone know me? Can’t you find something about me somehow?” he asked quickly.

“No…” answered the brunette slowly. “Just a few personal items, and those will be returned to you soon. Why, what’s the matter?”

“I can’t remember,” he whispered. “I can’t remember anything. I don’t know who I am.”

---

“Amnesia,” Doctor Morita mused, his finger tapping a staccato on the clipboard in front of him. All useless of course; with today’s technology, all he had to do was press the standby button and a heat-sensitive keyboard would pop up. Neater and more efficient than paper, but it gave him an impressive appearance. “Temporary, maybe, but you never know with all those complicated brain waves they send out in order to make Saiko Reality function.”

The patient in question frowned and tried not to look impatient. He was a young man in his mid-twenties, with dyed blonde hair and a small, stocky stature. The furrow in his brows suggested a constant stubbornness.

Doctor Morita smiled. “Saiko Reality is a kind of…virtual reality game, I suppose. I don’t know the specifics; I don’t have experience in it myself.” He shrugged. “What I do know is that it seems to be able to make the in-game experience very realistic by sending signals to the brain cells with some kind of simulation. They fool the brain cells into believing their nerves have touched or done something, even taste and smell, to a degree.

“We’re not sure if it’s connected to your amnesia. As you know, you haven’t sustained any physical damage, though your brain waves are a bit erratic. Nothing dangerous.”

Frowning, the patient glanced down at his hands as if he might read his past from them. Doctor Morita noticed and changed the subject. “What do you plan to do when you’re discharged?”

From the startled glance the young man shot him, the doctor guessed that he hadn’t even thought about it yet, and smiled. “The company plans to compensate you fully until you get back on your feet,” he mused out loud. “They don’t want a lawsuit on their hands, and since they can’t seem to find any relatives, friends, or even a vague past on you, they’re taking full responsibility of your well-being for a few months.”

The startled look came again, with increasing suspicion. “Why would they do that?”

He laughed. “They don’t want Saiko Reality’s popularity to go down, of course. Or for you to sue them. Well? You’re sure to find a job that will support you, even if you don’t know your own skills—PSC will make sure of that. What do you intend to do?”

The blonde pondered the question with a brooding look that fit his face quite well. “Recover my memories, I suppose. There’s got to be someone, or something, somewhere…”

“In that case…” The doctor unclipped a sheaf of papers from the board. “Here. The details of what they found, and a report on your condition.” Then he pushed forward several items lying on the desk. “These are the things they found on you, other than your clothes.” A small bag slid in front of him, neatly sealed and marked.

He reached eagerly for the papers and bag, but Doctor Morita held up a hand. “Don’t try interfacing with Saiko again,” warned the older man sternly, a strange look in his eyes. “It may cause more permanent damage, and I don’t entirely trust it not to. There are too many unexplained mechanics in those simulators. We’ll make some arrangements so you have regular appointments with me if you want to remember everything.” At the boy’s curious glance, he smiled. “I happen to have a degree in psychology as well, you know."

The papers were relinquished as soon as he nodded. His eyes darted across the page, taking in the information in jumpy flashes. None of it triggered any sense of familiarity, so he set it aside and reached for the bag,  but his hand slipped and its contents spilled onto the table with a clatter. He sighed in relief to find nothing broken. Jewelry, a wallet, several other things. The light caught on a small, slim, rectangular card; without thinking, he scooped it up.

At first it appeared to be made of smooth glass, and both perfectly clear and unremarkable. When he twisted his wrist, however, the light caught on its iridescent surface and he saw something inscribed into it.

In one corner was a logo, a set of black and red squares imprinted over three little red letters spelling out ‘PSC’. In the middle was a set of clear cut lines acting as some sort of barcode, and two characters spelling out what must’ve been a name.

“What is this?” he asked, flipping it around. There was nothing on the back. “From what I understand, it’s like an identification card for accounts on Saiko Reality,” Morita answered. “They found that in the slot of the machine and assumed it was yours, but the account had already logged out. That card provides the ID for it, but it also requires a passphrase in order to log onto that account.”

He turned the card around again, rubbing his fingers over the two characters. “Then this must be…”

“Your screen name, yes.”

The boy was quiet for a moment. “Since I don’t have a name…” he began.

A faint smile broke over the doctor’s face. “You plan to use it?”

“It’s the only name I have now.”

“Very well, Ruki-san. Shall we proceed with the check up so you can be discharged? We do not have a great many of beds, and I’m in no doubt that there is someone in the emergency room in need of yours.”
 
 
( 37 comments — Post a new comment )
- - {Chels ☆★: ルキ 【disgust】[info]abthitine on March 1st, 2009 05:59 pm (UTC)
I like this. It's different, a new type of read.
It kind of remind me of the video game, .hack, but of course a different story line. But similar things, that's why I like this so much. ^^

I like how, you used the different parts for this first part, like right off the bat something exciting happens and leaves the reader guessing. c:

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Koji: Kai[info]evilgeniuskoji on March 1st, 2009 06:06 pm (UTC)
Haha, I love .hack, but I've never played the video game; I've only read the manga, a few of the novels, and seen some of the anime. =P

Let's hope that excitement persists. Thanks for reading.
ナタシャ: Ruki_DAC[info]burn1ngcha0s on March 1st, 2009 09:20 pm (UTC)
Hmm. An interesting start for sure. I'm not sure where it might lead into, but I like it. The beginning had me scratching my head like "eeh?" but as I read on, it was "ooh..." :D SInce you left the start kinda hanging in the air, I will definitely look foward to reading on ^^

PS! Love the new layout~!
Koji: Reita[info]evilgeniuskoji on March 1st, 2009 10:51 pm (UTC)
Haha, I hope it doesn't get too confusing. =O

Thanks for reading. ^^ The layout is by [info]jrockxstar.
ナタシャ[info]burn1ngcha0s on March 1st, 2009 11:00 pm (UTC)
Naah, I'll figure it out sooner or later anyway :D
NP, I enjoyed it ;)
[info]chibi_ruki on March 1st, 2009 10:02 pm (UTC)
interesting beginning.
like someone said--it kind of reminded me of .hack, too, and I absolutely adored .hack

I'd like to see where this will go ^^;;
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on March 1st, 2009 10:51 pm (UTC)
Yes, yes, .hack is fun. =D

I'll try my best. =O
流ヰ: フィ二→赤ら顔[info]_hakushi on March 1st, 2009 10:56 pm (UTC)
Ohhh! This is certainly interesting~ I'm a big fan of MMORPG/virtual reality so I'm really looking forward to how this turns out! =D
(Anonymous) on March 2nd, 2009 12:49 am (UTC)
Yay, I'm glad you like it.
Koji: Miku[info]evilgeniuskoji on March 2nd, 2009 04:48 am (UTC)
Ah, sorry, that was me, but I forgot to log in. =P
MiniShimi[info]minishimi on March 2nd, 2009 01:19 am (UTC)
Wow, virtual reality - very new (to me) to the Gaze fiction world. I'm very interested in the rest of the story.

It would be really cool if there was an actual virtual reality game like that...but I wouldn't dare go near it. I'm already paranoid enough about what is real or what is not in this world, I do not need to go into a fake world to confuse me and make me even more paranoid.

Good job though. ^^

=^.^=
Koji: Reita [Dork][info]evilgeniuskoji on March 2nd, 2009 04:47 am (UTC)
I would personally love such a place. It'd be a great way to escape from "reality"--but that's part of the twists for this fic. =D

I'm still glad you liked it. Thank you.
maybe I'm the afterglow[info]hereticpop on March 5th, 2009 07:41 pm (UTC)
out of all the fics I need to catch up on, I chose this first because of the summary/plotline. that is something very original and it made me really curious. and it turns out that it is actually even more interesting than I thought, 'cause, silly me, I read "As Ruki delves into the secrets of Saiko Reality in search of his lost memories" as if "lost memories" was a metaphor or something. so when I realized he really lost his memories, I was like O.O, that's gonna be something.

but enough rambling, on to the story! it's interesting how this chapter is divided into three parts and each of them is very different. it gives a lot of information to the reader, but at the same time, the information doesn't explain anything, only poses questions. I absolutely adore it when a story plays with me and my curiousity since the very beginning. it makes me instantly crave for more! and judging by this beginning, I think you're taking a lot on yourself, as in, that's a hell of a story to write! by no means, I don't want to discourage you, quite the opposite, but I wanted to say that I quite understand why you decided to f-lock it for now. it must need a lot of working out the details. but the idea itself is awesome in my opinion and I'll be definitely cheering for you while you develop it. :)

some details considering this chapter that I'd like to mention. the first part - in the game part - was a little hard to feel for me, if I dare say so. I mean, I was slightly confused with what was going on. it could be because of it being the in the game part, bound to be confusing, or it could be because of me being sick and letters swimming slightly in front of my eyes. XD I can't quite put my finger on it, so maybe I just unnecessarily mention it.

the second part - I really liked the character of the nurse, she brings in some humour, with her "I'll file a complaint" and her slowness in realizing there is obviously something wrong with the patient. the comparison between her and the tragedy of Ruki's memory loss is really nice.

he third part, which I'll call the info part, because it's very informative [I'm so smart, duh.], it's good as well. the only thing that seemed somewhat unconvincing to me was how the doctor was so eager on discharging Ruki. wasn't he a rather interesting case, with the unexplained amnesia? although the PSC taking care of him does make sense. it seems there's a lot behind that game, much more than the public seems to think there is, huh? ;)

sorry for the chaos in this comment and probable mistakes, I'll gladly explain myself if I wrote something unintelligible. as I said, I find the plot idea absolutely fantastic and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. ^.^
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on March 6th, 2009 02:08 am (UTC)
Aha, yes, Ruki really does loses his memories. =P It's going to be hard to write. ><;; I hope I can get through this all right.

Oh, yeah. I can understand why the first part would be off-putting to many people. Thanks for actually saying it. I'm sure it's not just you. I think I'll be revising that a bit.

As for the doctor discharging Ruki so early...well, you'll see. There's a reason he's not so eager to probe into the connection of the game and his memory loss.

I'm glad you think so. =P I hope I can hop to it soon enough.
a kaonashi[info]shii_tan on March 8th, 2009 08:56 am (UTC)
The strange sensation washed over him, and every particle of his borrowed body felt pricked by needles, as if the whole thing had fallen asleep. His companion gave a cry of alarm as his body wavered and broke into disjoined pixels before reforming again steadily. The hand he reached out with went right through Ruki’s shoulder, no longer substantial.

Oh ~ this sounds very promising. I'm definitely keeping an eye on it ^_^
Koji: Ruki [look at me][info]evilgeniuskoji on March 8th, 2009 09:17 am (UTC)
Thank you, I'll do my best. =P
kanaaaaaaaa~[info]k435y on March 17th, 2009 08:58 am (UTC)
Woooooooow... I already like this start. =) I love the suspicion and everything. Please update again soon.
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on March 17th, 2009 02:10 pm (UTC)
Ah, wow, thank you. I'm wondering, though, how did you find this? I hadn't publicized it yet.
kanaaaaaaaa~[info]k435y on March 17th, 2009 05:15 pm (UTC)
Really? I thought I found it in one of the comms...and had saved it to my Favorites 'til now. I don't know anymore. LOL. Maybe I was stalking you? =/
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on March 18th, 2009 01:42 am (UTC)
Ohhh, I see. No, you're right, I put it in a comm, but I took it down the next day because it needed some revising. You must've got to it before I locked it down.
ainult, et[info]heygeorge on April 4th, 2009 01:22 pm (UTC)
I managed to completely miss this fic before. You really write the most eye catching summaries. I'm going to read it later but omg AU with virtual reality? Sounds very good.
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 4th, 2009 04:21 pm (UTC)
Ehh? You did? I could've sworn you DID read it--but okay. ^^
ainult, et[info]heygeorge on April 10th, 2009 07:11 pm (UTC)
:3
Okay. Okaaay. My face is rather o3o right now. Really, my eyes and mind rest while I'm reading something your mind and skillful fingers have typed up.
I don't know. I'd like to say something good and long, but yes. I liked the virual reality as I thought I would and it's an refreshing idea for an AU not like "Ruki goes out for coffe and omg isn't that a hot waitress with a noseband!" type of AU. And that brings me to how Reita hasn't appeared yet. That's always a good sign if their possible love/sex interest doesn't appear right away.
And your Ruki - a small, stocky stature. The furrow in his brows suggested a constant stubbornness. Very good.
Imma go clean my kitchen to distance myself from this fic for a while and to torture myself and then rush back and read the next chapter.
Keep it up! You're so great!
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 10th, 2009 10:45 pm (UTC)
Re: :3
You exaggerate. xD Ruki-and-the-hot-waitress fics usually tend to disappoint.

Well, Ruki IS a stubborn a-hole. xD

Pfft, torture. Good luck with the kitchen, love. ^^
kaaj[info]kaaj on April 4th, 2009 02:54 pm (UTC)
This story is very cool :DDD
* go to read the next part*

Koji: Reita[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 4th, 2009 04:13 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading~.
Beautiful Silence: ruki[info]pooobaihr on April 4th, 2009 07:48 pm (UTC)
interesting...
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 4th, 2009 08:05 pm (UTC)
Thanks.
Dream_Of_Kawaii[info]dream_of_kawaii on April 4th, 2009 09:06 pm (UTC)
This sounds really interesting. ^^ I like your fan fiction… its always so different and original. ^^ I must have missed this when you posted but i’m so glad I spotted it this time! >>Is off to read the next part!<<
Koji: Reita [Dork][info]evilgeniuskoji on April 4th, 2009 09:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you. ^^ I'm glad you like it~.
kousenteki[info]xphosphorous on April 17th, 2009 12:17 am (UTC)
Fuuuuck, reituki sci-fi! I can't believe I held off reading this for as long as i did! :DD

This is gonna be awesome, I can just tell.
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 17th, 2009 12:26 am (UTC)
Hm. I wonder if this fic still counts as sci-fi. My other series certainly did, though. xD

Thanks!
kousenteki[info]xphosphorous on April 17th, 2009 12:30 am (UTC)
It counts enough for me to fall for it HARD. xDD Sci-fi is one of my weaknesses. I can almost see some of the plot devices falling together. UNLESS OF COURSE YOU HAVE SOME CRAZY TWIST IN THERE. WHICH WOULD BE NEAT.

Also, i just finished the 3rd chapter. * [] * Rukiiii~! OH REITA, U SO SUAVE AND MYSTERIOUS JUMPING IN LIEK THAT ;DD
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 17th, 2009 12:55 am (UTC)
Oyay. xD ...Twists are what I am aiming for. :3

I'm glad you liked it. xD Reita is so not cool once he opens his mouth, though.
kousenteki[info]xphosphorous on April 17th, 2009 01:30 am (UTC)
YEY. C:

xDD Yaaaay dorky/awkward!Reita!
animefan961[info]animefan961 on September 13th, 2009 01:33 pm (UTC)
oh my god this is so cool. ive never read anything like this. the only thing that ive seen like this was spy kids 2 lol
Koji: Reita[info]evilgeniuskoji on September 13th, 2009 03:49 pm (UTC)
Heheh, thanks. ^^
 
 

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