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16 April 2009 @ 09:42 am
[Fic] Access Denied: 03- Reita/Ruki  
Title: Access Denied
Chapter: 3/??
Author: [info]evilgeniuskoji
Beta: [info]visualcomplex
Pairing: Reita/Ruki
Genre: General, Mystery, Scifi-ish
Rating: PG-13
Warning: None
Summary: AU. Saiko Reality is the hottest new virtual reality simulator. With an in-game experience that questions your reality and theirs, PSC's newest product has establishd a wide branch all over Central Tokyo. Such a large corporation cannot go witout its dark secrets...and as he struggles to remember his past, Ruki finds himself ensnared in the very heart of the problem.

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Ruki felt half-anchored looking through the eyes of a body that seemed both familiar and unfamiliar. A pair of glasses perched on his nose, though the part of him anchored to the body was so used to it that it did not even register with him until his hand moved to push it up as it slid down his nose.

The glass was rain-spotted and his hair was damp as he hurried down a street and into a cafe. He scanned the room and ducked past a waitress when he spotted a young man sitting at the corner booth.

The man in question didn’t look up as Ruki approached him, obviously preoccupied with the Nintendo DS in his hands. Ruki snorted and rolled his eyes, not surprised at all. Typical.

His chair squeaked loudly as he pulled it back and sat down. The man jumped, his dark hair falling into his slanted brown eyes in his surprise. Then a wide smile stretched thin lips over a boyish face that was made prominent by his soft cheeks and round, pug-like nose.

“Ruki!” he greeted. His voice had a deep timbre to it, and carried traces of warmth and shyness that Ruki didn’t understand. “It’s…it’s really good to see you.”

He felt the corners of himself smile. “I just saw you last night.”

The young man rolled his eyes. “You know what I mean.”

Ruki smiled again, more widely than before. “Yeah. Nice to meet you too, Reita.”



Ruki jerked away as the intercom switched on and a cool, female voice announced the next stop. He wiped the sweat from his face as the doors slid back and a portion of the crowd moved off the crowded train, only to be quickly replaced by new passengers.

It was somewhat of an amazement that he fell asleep at all on Japan’s infamous trains, but then, this time Ruki had been lucky enough to secure a seat. A quick check assured him that no one had picked his pockets, and Ruki returned to wondering over the dream. It had been lucidly clear, and more substantial than fragmented images and tantalizing hints his dreams had been of late.

So much more that Ruki wondered if it was a memory.

A face rose unbidden to his mind, the face of the man from his dream, a dark haired, open, friendly face. For some reason he thought that the hair should have been blonde and the eyes hawk-like and gray.

Ginza Station, Ginza Station,” the cool female voice announced. Ruki got up quickly and made his way towards the door; his seat was swiftly taken over by a relieved-looking student with a bag that had things protruding against the fabric like textbook corners.

As always, the streets of Ginza district were busy, and as always Ruki felt insignificant and anonymous in the crowd amongst the towering buildings with their winking windows and mirror-smooth ads. The crowd picked him up and made him a part of itself, a mass that moved of its own will and accord, and in that moment it didn’t matter who he was.

Ruki shrugged off the feeling and set a brisk pace, hands automatically stuffing themselves into his pockets and pulling the open ends of his jacket closer together. There was an energizing sort of cold in the air, the kind that inspired wakefulness rather than lethargy. He passed under one of the large advertising screens wrapped around the buildings, half listening to the song seeping out of the speakers as he did.

So long to the other side of the light

So long to nameless liberty

So long, devour your fears

So long, fly higher than anyone


His destination was a small but classy jewelry store strategically located in the heart of Ginza. It was open and spacious, well-lit and built so that one end of the store was visible to the other at all times. Soft white marble paved the floors and small niches were carved into the cream-colored stone walls. They were lined with velvet rises that held both jewelry and fine figurines on display behind glass walls.

A single counter was situated in the middle of the room, rectangular, with collection of necklaces and rings sitting behind a glass case. The counter was manned by a middle-aged salesman, smartly dressed and exuding an air of efficiency. He seemed surprised at the sight of Ruki, raising a brow questioningly.

“What are you doing here, Ruki-kun? Today is your day off.”

Ruki smiled in greeting and bowed politely. “Good evening, Kawaichi-san. I apologize for missing work this morning.”

The reply he received was dry and accompanied by an amused smile. “Of course, Ruki-kun. You came in specifically to apologize for taking a day off when you had already informed us that you would do so ahead of time.”

Ruki winced, caught in the lie, but amended it with an apologetic smile. “Sorry, Kawaichi-san. I left my ring here last week and wanted to get it back.”

“Oh, that thing? I sold it to a customer who admired it.”

“What?” Eyes widened almost comically at his casual response. “Kawaichi-san, I’ve had that ring for over three years!”

The older man laughed and waved towards the backroom where all the records and paperwork was kept. “It’s in there.”

Relaxing but shaking his head at the joke the store manager had had at his expense, Ruki quickly rounded past the counter, his shoes a quiet click on the smooth stone floor. The room was dark and cool, the former of which was quickly remedied when he flicked the light switch. It was easy enough to locate the ring on the table, and he noticeably loosened when he slid it back on his finger.

It was wide and thick, easily fitting around his finger and carved into the shape of a large silver skull with pitted black eyes and stained jaws. The ring had been amongst the few things the hospital staff had found on him when he woke up three years ago, and remained on his person regularly, and so Ruki had been reasonably anxious when he realized that he’d left it at work.

“Found it?” was Kawaichi’s mild question when Ruki emerged from the backroom. He nodded and smiled.

“Yes.” The blonde lifted his hand and flashed the ring in response. “Thank you for taking care of it.”

“You’re welcome.” An elegantly engraved brooch occupied the salesman’s attention as he polished it absently. “The design looked familiar. Harugin, I think.”

“Harugin?” Ruki blinked, thrown by the sudden change in subject. “I’ve never heard of it...”

“It was a popular brand six or seven years ago of an independent store,” explained the other. “Our store used to carry their products, but…” he shrugged. “They stopped production then.”

“Oh…” A frown found its way onto his face. “Why?”

“Who knows? There were only rumors.”

“About what?”

Faint light glinted off a curiously shaped object pinned to his suit. “The disappearance of the owner.”

---

“Irrashai!”

The tinkle of bells and a young, teenage girl’s cheery voice greeted him as he entered the shop. She had big brown eyes, low slung pigtails and an apron stamped with numerous pictures of dog bones. A name tag was pinned onto it, reading ‘Sora’. “Welcome to Rin’s Pet Shop! How may I help you?”

“Ah…” A small, slightly uncertain smile made its way onto Ruki’s face. “I’m looking for a dog…”

“Oh!” Sora clapped her hands together with a wide grin. “That’s great! A puppy or a full-grown dog?”

“A puppy. Something for an apartment…”

The young girl nodded thoughtfully and seemed to think for a moment before flashing him another grin. “If you’ll follow me?”

She led him to the pens by the front display window where a group of puppies were wrestling playfully. “Here are the puppies in the store,” explained the girl as he drew closer to examine them. “Some of them shed more than others, but they should be alright in your apartment if you don’t mind a bit of fur now and then.” Noticing Ruki’s expression, she encouraged, “Go ahead. You can pick them up if you want.”

He hesitated, but his attention was caught when a small white and brown dog patted up to the low barrier fencing off the pen and looked up at him inquisitively. The big, watery eyes did him in and he scooped the puppy up eagerly, stroking its long silky coat and scratching behind its ears. A tiny tail wagged gleefully.

“What kind of dog is this?” he asked softly, trying to think of the book on dog breeds Doctor Morita had lent him.

“Papillion,” Sora replied promptly. “His name is Sabu.”

“Sabu-chan,” Ruki said, testing out the name. The puppy seemed to wag even harder and licked his hand.

Twenty minutes later, he walked out of Rin’s Pet Store with a new dog and leash in hand.


On his way back, a faint melody caught his ear. Ruki paused mid-step and cocked his head. Sabu stopped too when the leash tugged gently on his collar and looked up questioningly at Ruki, who fished out his cell phone from his pocket. The flood of people fluctuated and shifted around him automatically.

Recognizing the name on the screen, Ruki resumed walking and brought the phone to his hear. “Hello?”

“Hello? Ruki? It’s Kai!” announced the voice on the other end. “Where are you right now?”

“Ha?” he brushed his hair from his eyes. Below him, Sabu paced over the concrete and seemed to enjoy himself. “I’m in Ginza.”

“Ginza?” The dark-haired man’s voice sounded surprised. “Why are you there?”

“Ah…didn’t you tell me to buy salt?” Ruki glanced down surreptitiously at the two extra bags of bedding, toys, and dog food.

“But it’s much more expensive in Ginza!”

“Don’t complain, I was already here.” He slowed to a stop at the crosswalk. Sabu promptly sat on his bottom and began scratching himself. “Did you need something?”

“Oh, yeah.” Something about Kai’s voice shifted, but he couldn’t pin it down. “Just wanted to remind you to get the salt.”

“Already have it.”

“Really? Where are you now?”

Ruki glanced up. “Just passed the old Sony building.” The light turned green. “I’m going to hang up now, Kai, okay?”

“Yeah, okay. Bye, Ruki.”

“See you when I get back.” Quickly sliding the phone back in his pocket, Ruki tugged on Sabu’s leash. Already the people on his side of the sidewalk had already made it to the last side and he was the only one standing there. The light turned yellow as he stepped off the curb.

At the corner of his eye, a car came down the lane, going too fast to brake in time. It honked at him loudly as the light turned yellow, but his body wouldn’t move. He could almost hear the impact of aluminum on his flesh, imploding through meat and muscle and blood splattering over windshields and concrete—

Someone’s hand grabbed onto the back of his shirt and yanked, hard. Ruki stumbled back, falling on the floor, and Sabu’s leash slipped through his slack fingers. Aware of the sudden freedom, the puppy did what any puppy would do and took advantage of it. He darted across the painted stripes of the crosswalk, tiny legs propelling him almost to the other end of the street, soaring, almost, into the front bumper of a small blue Civic.

The gore on the road wasn’t his, but that of the too-still puppy lying three yards away, its fur soaked in blood. Pitiful murmurs came rose the crowd like the buzz of an angry bee, and Ruki could only sit there, hands numb and eyes staring, staring at that small, limp body.

A hand gripped his shoulder and bent his lips to his ear. “That could have been you,” whispered an oddly familiar voice. “They’re after you now. Don’t trust anyone.” He registered bleached blonde hair before the person was gone, disappearing into the crowd.

A broken food dish lay at his feet, spilled out of the fallen shopping bag.

Two minutes later, he picked himself up again and turned to face the uniformed men approaching him with clipboards and clean up tools in hand.

---

The ride home didn’t feel quite real. Ruki mechanically fed the train station’s ticket slot, climbed on, and held onto a hand grip. Eventually he roused enough to get off at the right station and began the slow walk back.

His plodding footsteps filled his ears the duration of the walk, but they were suddenly overwhelmed by the shriek of a siren as a fire truck rushed by. Ruki lifted his eyes and followed after the flashing red car for a moment. Then he shifted his gaze over, where the tall rise of his apartment complex was visible.

A thin trail of black smoke climbed lazily in the air from the fourth floor.

For a moment, Ruki just stared. Then he broke into a dead run.
 
 
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<3 Enid.*: Ruki - so much love <33[info]ice_breath_117 on April 16th, 2009 05:32 pm (UTC)
ooh. Cliffhanger.

Just read three chapters, and i gotta say it's very intriguing. The plot seems really mysterious, and I can't wait to find out more =) I like the way you've characterized Ruki.

Poor Koron ;__;
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 16th, 2009 05:50 pm (UTC)
Ack, sorry, I had a last minute change. ._, Koron is actually Sabu (who was Ruki's old dog before he died). -cough- Your comment made me realize what would've been more appropriate. Sorry for this!

Thanks for reading, though.
(no subject) - [info]ice_breath_117 on April 16th, 2009 05:51 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]evilgeniuskoji on April 16th, 2009 05:55 pm (UTC)
a kaonashi[info]shii_tan on April 16th, 2009 08:38 pm (UTC)
Then he broke into a dead run. ~
Woah.

I liked this very, very much. The change of atmosphere was brutal and unexpected. Well-done. :tries not to go into too much detail and giggles:

His plodding footsteps filled his ears the duration of the walk, but they were suddenly overwhelmed by the shriek of a siren as a fire truck rushed by. Ruki lifted his eyes and followed after the flashing red car for a moment. Then he shifted his gaze over, where the tall rise of his apartment complex was visible.

A thin trail of black smoke climbed lazily in the air from the fourth floor.

For a moment, Ruki just stared. Then he broke into a dead run.


A very effective ending there. Just as I thought it couldn't get worse for him...
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 16th, 2009 08:42 pm (UTC)
Re: Then he broke into a dead run. ~
Yayyy. The ending was easier to write than teh beginning, I'll tell you that. -phew- I like detail. =D

Just as I thought it couldn't get worse for him...

It gets worse, yes, I know. xD I'm horrible.

I take it you like that line~.
neuromancer: the GazettE - Ruki1[info]setsuna_81 on April 16th, 2009 09:10 pm (UTC)
I'm so relieved that Reita seems harmless, moreover he saved Ruki's life!
But the fact he almost died soon after he informed Kai about his current location, made me worry. But maybe Kai and Reita works together to help Ruki...
I don't know...

I can't wait for the next chapter!
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 16th, 2009 09:17 pm (UTC)
-cough- Sharp eye, but we shall see.

I'll try to write it soon, but I doubt it'll be up next week.
maybe I'm the afterglow[info]hereticpop on April 17th, 2009 11:53 am (UTC)
omg, I read it yesterday evening after all, but I was too sleepy to write a proper comment. I'll go on about both chapter 2 and 3 here, hopefully in a not too messy way.

the plot gets more and more interesting with each part. seriously. I thought it was original at the beginning, but I was surprised multiple times while reading chap. 2 & 3. and I really like the fact that it doesn't go ahead in one line of events, but it's, sort of, layered: the bad people that want Ruki dead, Ruki's memories/dreams, appearance of Reita, and other things, they are connected but in a very mysterious way. you manage to balance on the line between guessable and confusing in an interesting manner.

I really liked the description of the show that opens chapter 2. the way you described Mako, the way you described Ruki, it flows very well. and Takashima-san's sake corner is simply priceless. :D

I got suspicious about Kai and still am after reading chapter 3. I just can't quite decide on which side of things I'd put him. I'd say, he's with the bad guys but he's good and doesn't want Ruki killed.

doctor Morita is another person that is suspicious and knows more than he seems to. appearance of Reita there at the end of chapter 2 really surprised me and confused me. it creates so many possibilities for guessing what's going on... I'll wait for next chapters, though, with my guessing. :P

now, chapter 2 was more of a bridge between what we learned in chapter one and what is going on "now", right? the real action started with chap. 3, though, and here I was surprised a few times as well. the beginning, at first I totally didn't get what was going on, I have to admit. I mean, there's definitely loads of information hidden in that dream Ruki has but it's too vague to figure out yet. Reita's part of Ruki's past, that's for sure.

I really liked the whole part in the jewellry shop. very interesting things we learn there...

and omg, poor Sabu-chan! it's so cruel. >.> but I guess it creates a feeling of seriousness, which is even more underlined at the end of this chapter with For a moment, Ruki just stared. Then he broke into a dead run. suddenly the evil that we, readers, knew was there, comes out to the daylight and Ruki sees it too. I love those moments in stories. XD

all in all, really well done. an idea is one thing, and the execution of it is another and you're doing great with both. I was interested after the first chapter and now I'm really hooked and can't wait to read more. :D
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 17th, 2009 05:18 pm (UTC)
It's good to know that I didn't mess up and make it too confusing!

Haha, wow, you're sharp! ^^ Perceptive!

Heh, what my teacher always tells me is that people take the death of animals so much harder than that of a human...proof here. XD

Thank you! I'll try to get the next chatper up, but who knows when that will be. >>
(no subject) - [info]hereticpop on April 18th, 2009 01:05 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]evilgeniuskoji on April 18th, 2009 03:07 pm (UTC)
hara_emi[info]hara_emi on April 17th, 2009 02:54 pm (UTC)
That must have been Reita! Ruki's memories are trickling back and i guess it'll reveal some terrible secret the evil people are trying to keep under cover. Kai is freaking me out a lil. It's a pity Sabu-chan died just when she got a wonderfu owner D=
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 17th, 2009 05:16 pm (UTC)
Yes, indeed. Thank you for reading.
amande_sama[info]amande_sama on April 17th, 2009 03:59 pm (UTC)
Yes and update :3 this fic really gt me hooked up!
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 17th, 2009 05:15 pm (UTC)
Thank you; please continue to read!
kaaj[info]kaaj on April 17th, 2009 06:43 pm (UTC)
Cliffhanger >o<"
But a very nice chapter <333
Well done.
Koji: Reita [Dork][info]evilgeniuskoji on April 17th, 2009 07:37 pm (UTC)
Thank you, thank you~.
micukofelton[info]micukofelton on April 17th, 2009 07:43 pm (UTC)
wow, this is so interesting. ^^
The chapter made me soo happy.
Can't wait to see what else will happen, heh, loved it. *_*
Koji: Kai[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 17th, 2009 07:45 pm (UTC)
I'm glad to hear you liked it. Thanks for reading.
L[info]deviant_heresy on April 17th, 2009 10:54 pm (UTC)
WOW.. I just read all 3 chapters and I must say I really like it. can't wait for the next chapter...
Koji: Miku[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 17th, 2009 11:04 pm (UTC)
Good to hear! I'm glad you like it!
² will fire action seeking radar;: # mustang - hellfire[info]gunplaytonight on April 17th, 2009 10:54 pm (UTC)
I'm really loving this - it's something totally different and obviously you've really thought about your plot properly and I like that it isn't totally linear - and course, I'm a bitch for cliffhangers like everyone else on Earth too. ;p

BUT

SABUUUUU - animal death hurts me so. ];
Koji: Aoi [Ayabie][info]evilgeniuskoji on April 17th, 2009 11:04 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you like it! xD Yeah, my beta and I have slaved over this thing for weeks and I've only got three chapters up, but howell, I'm pleased with the progress. xD

Pfft, everyone seems so effected by puppy death, but no one ever blinks at people death.
(no subject) - [info]gunplaytonight on April 18th, 2009 01:17 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]evilgeniuskoji on April 18th, 2009 03:07 pm (UTC)
toujin1: Ruki SE X[info]toujin1 on April 18th, 2009 12:05 am (UTC)
I'm loving this! Great work, and I cannot wait for more!
Koji: Reita[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 18th, 2009 01:17 am (UTC)
Glad to hear it. ^^ Thanks for reading.
focaccina[info]focaccina on April 18th, 2009 04:07 am (UTC)
O_O Cliffhanger!

*ahem* anyways, REITA! *pinches his pug nose*

And Ruki, the supposed owner of Harugin? Sweet.

Poor Sabu-chan though ;_;

Can't wait for the next chap!
Koji: Ruki [O rly?][info]evilgeniuskoji on April 18th, 2009 04:57 am (UTC)
Haha, Ruki as the owner of Harugin. xD Interesting intake.

Aw, everyone is sad about Sabu-chan.

Thanks for reading!
(no subject) - [info]focaccina on April 18th, 2009 05:00 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]evilgeniuskoji on April 18th, 2009 05:29 am (UTC)
ainult, et[info]heygeorge on April 18th, 2009 05:49 pm (UTC)
Ah, I think Ruki developed a necessary skill for travelling by train in Japan. I remember my teacher always told me the Japanese take every free second they have to either sleep or to read a manga and they all have it in their DNA to wake up just at the right time. :)

Interesting changes in Reita, though, from dark haired, open, friendly face to blonde and the eyes hawk-like and gray. Interesting. I'm really interested to see how you write the pairing and the romance/feelings into this all.

I like this: . There was an energizing sort of cold in the air, the kind that inspired wakefulness rather than lethargy. Nice thinking. And how Ruki heard N&S playing, haha.

And I like how you portray Ruki kind of innocent here. Like he really has no dark thoughts, he's just living his life. And yet... Faint light glinted off a curiously shaped object pinned to his suit. haha I want to be suspicious of everybody!

And as all the others have said something about it, I guess I have to comment on Sabu's death as well. And I rather liked it. It was so - life. Ruki skipping down the street with his little puppy and bam, the next thing you know, somebody is stuffing the corpse of your cute doggy into a black plastic bag.

I really can't tell if Ruki was as innocent before he lost his memory but as he seems so harmless and blameless now, I really feel bad for all the things happening to him.

Woo, long comment! As always, you have nice vocabulary. Keep it up, I like it, Koji-moji-cutie. <3
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 18th, 2009 06:04 pm (UTC)
Haha, really? ._. Amazing, isn't it.

Uuuaahhh, the romance. ><;; I hope I do alright with that bit.

-snickers- Sorry, the way you described Sabu's death is really amusing for some reason. xD

Thanks~. <3
Dream_Of_Kawaii: RukiSmoke[info]dream_of_kawaii on April 18th, 2009 08:50 pm (UTC)
I was waiting for this! ^^ I read it before I had to get ready for work earlier and it cheered me up considerably. X3

Firstly… you killed they puppy. 0__0!! I can’t express how devastated I would be if I were in Ruki’s place. I mean, just reading it was enough to get to me, lol. Although the ‘Reita’ part, pulling Ru back, was remedy enough.
I really enjoy that air of mysteriousness you’re keeping within this fic. I feel as if I’m experiencing everything with Ruki and I like not being able to guess what’s going to happen next. Also I may be one of the only people willing to admit this but I adore cliff-hangers and this was a killer! Only, I hope Kai is ok. =/ Things are really starting to heat up, ne? (pun intended x3) I can’t wait to find out what’s going on.

Anyway, before I go I also wanted ask if it would be ok add you as a friend?
Koji: Reita [Dork][info]evilgeniuskoji on April 19th, 2009 12:06 am (UTC)
Heheh, I'm glad I contributed to your day in some ay. ^^

I'm sorry~. I knew I'd get lots of responses about the puppy. xD I think everyone said something about it.

Thank you. =D Please feel free! You have been supporting my work for so long, I totally don't mind! ^^
(no subject) - [info]dream_of_kawaii on April 24th, 2009 07:25 pm (UTC)
Peachi☆[info]perfectpeach86 on April 19th, 2009 04:42 am (UTC)
Wow, I am really interested in this fic! What a cliffhanger...*_*
Can't wait for more ~
Koji: Ruki [Heart][info]evilgeniuskoji on April 19th, 2009 04:53 am (UTC)
Glad to hear it~.
Cute icon. ^^
kanaaaaaaaa~[info]k435y on April 19th, 2009 05:05 am (UTC)
Sounds like Kai knows something. And Reita saved him from a similar fate as Sabu (poor thing). Who else has blonde hair in the band? =/ Anyway, hope nothing happened to Kai. =S I am still very captured. Please update soon. =)
Koji: Kai[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 19th, 2009 05:18 am (UTC)
Haha, some people desccribe Uruha's hair as blonde, but I agree~.
Well. We shall see. I'm glad you're enjoying it. ^^ I'll try.
drunkelnatt[info]drunkelnatt on April 20th, 2009 03:45 pm (UTC)
I'm... suspecting Kai. He leaked the information on Ruki's whereabouts but when the car failed to hit him, they kill Kai instead? Hmmmm.

And Ruki=Harugin owner. I won't try to guess who the mysterious blonde who saved him is, lol. I would've probably guessed him as Reita coz he's the only one from Ruki's past who meets him again 3 years later when Ruki's starting to gain his memories back; and the doctor's suspicious too, coz Reita has appointments with him too. HMMMMMMMMM.
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 20th, 2009 10:27 pm (UTC)
Oh yes? 8D Well, we'll see!

Hahahha, thank you for your comment. ^^
ryuushinikaru: Ruki[info]ryuushinikaru on April 22nd, 2009 04:16 pm (UTC)
Wow. You know, I'm both glad that I had three chapters to get through and also horribly disappointed that there isn't more to read today. I really like where this is going. You know I had an obsession in Beneath the Umbrella with how Ruki was always saving poor little damsel Reita. It was nice to see just a bit of that flip in this chapter.

It has a very nice mystery/sci-fi feel to it. Which happens to be one of my favorite genres, so well done there. Now get to work woman. You can't leave us hanging forever. ^-^
Koji[info]evilgeniuskoji on April 23rd, 2009 03:07 am (UTC)
Nyahaha, I am glad I have caught your intrigue. =D Dude, Reita's damsel in distress problems. xD I have to put that into play again.

Pshhh, I can so. I'm working more slowly with this fic than Beneath the Umbrella cause I'm putting more thought, effort, and plotting into it. That, and my beta will rip me apart if it sucks~. xD At least, I hope she would.
(no subject) - [info]ryuushinikaru on April 23rd, 2009 05:21 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]evilgeniuskoji on April 23rd, 2009 05:59 am (UTC)
ヒトミ[info]shuuha on April 28th, 2009 11:13 am (UTC)
KAI IS BURNING OMG
Koji: Aoi [Ayabie][info]evilgeniuskoji on April 28th, 2009 01:51 pm (UTC)
Lulz, trust you to take ti that way, Hitomi-san.
animefan961[info]animefan961 on September 13th, 2009 02:58 pm (UTC)
poor Sabu :( he was so young T_T. Anyways, I'm guessing Kai forgot to turn off the stove lol
Koji: Kai[info]evilgeniuskoji on September 13th, 2009 03:49 pm (UTC)
Haha, that does seem like somethig Kai would do. Thank you for reading.
 
 

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